I like your name. Anyways, this seems alright. And for a not very detailed one it still looks neat for what it is so far.
I'm just wondering about the sound, I'm talking about when this gets made up more. Will you have the characters talking or will you have music throughout the entire thing? Or it could have no music, not chitchat, but just sounds. Like walking on grass, blowing, gasps.
Anyways, great! I assume its nice to work with your GF on this too! This looks like it will be neat, cute if I dare say (I rarely say cute at all).
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i dig it