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So really, we're all just insane, formerly dead swans.

I need more.

I feel you captured Jay's essence best of all.

That texture overlay doesn't work. The vertical lines are much too strong and affect the composition within the animation. The twist at the end didn't make a whole lot of sense either. If he was looking at a picture of them just before the train got there, how would he forget to bring them onboard?

You did employ a reasonable variety of different shots which seemed to work well enough together and weren't too difficult to follow.

I wish you'd put more time into the art.

The music wasn't always fitting. In the future, try selecting more than one soundtrack to cut between in order to keep the soundbed consistent with the mood you're trying to convey.

Bork20 responds:

Thanks SuperBastard! Thats some good advice.

There's a lot more influence from John K. in this than there is from David Firth. Seems like nobody on NG remembers Ren and Stimpy.

My favorite aspect of this piece is how you managed to break the character's silhouette so frequently. It was a simple character design but you managed to make it expressive and insane without confusing your audience.

Backgrounds were simple yet effective. Voice acting was good. Sound design was good except for the beetle's footsteps, which didn't feel as though they matched up perfectly. Did you ever consider using general skittering noises instead of intentionally placing the sounds of footsteps while he walked? It might have worked to contribute to the 'creepiness.'

Well done, overall.

It was cool looking, sure, but so was the original scene. You didn't add anything to it. You didn't use animation to exaggerate or create something that would otherwise not exist in the real world. It wasn't interesting or in any way creative. I'm sure it was an interesting study but it was just that: a study.

Never stop making stuff. You're easily among my favorite animators around; nobody else does quite what you do. Serious respect.

spacefader responds:

Hey, no doubt, am working on a new animation right now.

Beautiful.

Oh the desire sensor, how I hate the thing. I have so many stories of just not getting the thing I want... I remember trying to get Rathian Spike+ for Sieglinde and ending up with like 4 rubies before I had what I needed.

I'd love for you to make this a series, we need more Monster Hunter animations!

Thanks for the advice, shit.

Hi I draw things, and sometimes I draw lots of things that look like they're moving when you look at them one after another really fast. Also music!

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